i like how you were talking clear
i like that you put lots of expression
I like how you put lots of detail.
i love how you put a lot of confidence and many powerful words
Good claim.
I liked your claim, and how you asked questions :)
I like your hook in the lead.I like how you told the reader what was happening.I recommend you should have less pauses
I liked how you went right to the topic insted of spending time in your name.
thank you all of you
i like how you were talking clear
ReplyDeletei like that you put lots of expression
ReplyDeleteI like how you put lots of detail.
ReplyDeletei love how you put a lot of confidence and many powerful words
ReplyDeleteGood claim.
ReplyDeleteI liked your claim, and how you asked questions :)
ReplyDeleteI like your hook in the lead.
ReplyDeleteI like how you told the reader what was happening.
I recommend you should have less pauses
I liked how you went right to the topic insted of spending time in your name.
ReplyDeletethank you all of you
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